Or, is it?
Yes, and no.
It's done, but as I sit and stare at the pool and palm trees, I wonder if it needs a little something.
Switching my gaze from trees to Gaz, I seek his opinion and he agrees that it does, indeed, need a little something.
I knew it.
Panama Palmer was spicy and sizzling. So, I am ramping it up in Primitive.
Palmer and Addison (her special-man-friend) kick the book off with a VERY amorous interlude, but apparently that's not enough to please the above mentioned critic.
Yes, I did ask.
Yes, he is correct.
Yes, I will tinker with Chapter One and make it even spicier and drop in some plot hints.
First, I will put the above photo of G in the book.
No, he would probably veto that idea.
He's always right.
Damnit!
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